Rm 11
Glen Innes School
Dear Ms Parkes
Thank you for teaching us how to do our writing. I hope you have a nice holiday and a nice day. I hope really that you have had a good time at our cool school to because we have been very good to you when you were in our class.
I enjoyed Attributes because it had my favorite words like Happy, Fun, and Love. I chose those words because it was a really strong word. When I say it, It just reminds me of my family who looks after me.
I had a cool day doing work with you and my teacher on descriptive writing especially the one that you copied for us.
Yours sincerely
Munokoa
6 comments:
Kia Ora Munokoa,
I liked working with Ms Parkes because she helped me get my writing better. I hope she did the same to you. I think your writing is better because I enjoy reading your writing. What did you like when Ms Parkes helped us?
Talofa Lava Munokoa
I like your letter to Ms Parkes I think that it is great. I have also made a letter to Ms Parkes but I haven't posted it on my blog because I haven't had much time. I also like working with Ms Parkes because she helps me improve on my writing. What is your favourite attribute?
Kia Orana Tane
My favorite Attribute is Love.
Kia orana Samuel
I have enjoyed doing pet things with her when we had to describe it.
Kia orana Samuel
I have enjoyed doing pet things with her when we had to describe it.
Munokoa thank you for your letter. I think you have chosen some wonderful 'personal attribute' words. I especially like how you have linked happy, fun and love to your family. Love is your strongest word. I look forward to working with you and your class this term.
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