Once upon a time Munokoa the king got sick because two young children looked at my Queen I saw them then brought them to hell and said why are you looking at my Queen The man’s name was Tane he said he wanted to be king so he can see the Queen. But when Tane arrived Tane realised the evil from his head and started to get powers then when the King locked him away he realised his evil to open the gate. When the gate opened he escaped through my strong guards. There names were Ifa, Etai, Samuel, and Kelvin. They were trained by me I was the strongest in the world. My Queen was hungry so I took her to dinner we had meat with vegetables. When she and I went to sleep something strange happened.
My ears fell off I had a think in my head and said maybe because Tane Escaped from the cage I was upset So I sent my guards in and said catch Tane for me and then Kaho Shiloh's and Viliami came they said they will destroy me then I said I have strong guards But they all realised the evil and made me dance and then they chucked me on the wall then when they were gone I got angry. Then I told My guards to bring them quick I gave them a bottle to trap them in then one more guy needed to be caught he was Tane he was the only one left he was powerful then I told my guards to come then I went in I got Tane in the bottle and my queen was safe Mikayla.
6 comments:
Hi Munokoa.
Your story is very interesting. I like the part how you said your ears fell of. That made me laugh hahaha. :)
Hello Munokoa,
Do you know your spelling because you spelled kaho and Shiloh's name wrong? Are you going to fix it up.
Hi Munokoa
I saw your characters and you named 2 of them wrong.
Hello Munokoa,
Your story is a bit interesting and weird at the same time. I still liked it though. I like how you put me in your story and some of my other friends. That was very nice of you. Before you posted this, did you check it before you posted it? You should always do that when you post a story.
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